“My feet froze to the floor!” 比 “I’m scared” 生動100倍?
有時表達上令人感到沉悶,未必係詞彙量問題,要善用 「感官具象化」!
🚀 情緒升級公式表
基礎表達+關鍵意象=高階句子
Angry+身體變熱 → “Heat surged up my neck like a volcano about to erupt!”
Scared+雙腳像凍結一樣 → “My feet rooted to the ground as the shadow loomed.”
Tired+停止運作像機械故障 → “My brain switched to static mode after 3 exams.”
⚠️ 常見錯誤提醒
▫️ 過度修飾 → “My soul wept crystalline tears of boundless sorrow.”
▫️ 感官錯置 → “Fear tasted like purple.”